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Up in the sky by G00dieGumdrops Up in the sky by G00dieGumdrops
Any advice is very much appreciated
I personally like this but ill prob hate it soon haha
I wish i could request critiques so this is my effort, please critique :D
texture from nasa

PS: download looks way sharper imo

Edit: Changed some stuff up from feedback, havent gotten to all of it yet though, changed the angle of the planet :P
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Wordgirlserenity67 Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Coolerocious!!:-) 
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XelfrepuslaX Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
the atmosphere colour looks kind of weird especially with the planets colour. The rings are quite nice, but they seem to be too close to the planet (The one supposedly going around closest to the viewer looks like it could spear right through the planet lol)
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G00dieGumdrops Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Its funny because i just recently realized that the rings were bizarre in this one and i had never noticed the purple or whatever in the atmosphere but that could be due to any number of things scientifically. Dont think ill ever get to changing this one but thanks for comment:D
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XelfrepuslaX Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
Ahh okay :D. You're most welcome my friend :D
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Kahdrim Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Brilliant work. So real
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Kahdrim Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Stunning!. Can you just imagine being there. :)
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G00dieGumdrops Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Student General Artist
I always think when i die ill be able to just go places like this haha at least thats what i hope :D
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brstarship Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I believe that you need to project a few shadows from the rings over the surface of the planet too. ;)
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G00dieGumdrops Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student General Artist
You are definitely right haha, i dont know if ill get to it though, in the future however ill make sure i do
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jizzyjiz Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow
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jimmo0jambo Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011
fantablous
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G00dieGumdrops Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks much :D
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SaganPony Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011
Great :)

I can imagine an Earth like planet, with rings.
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G00dieGumdrops Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you, and so can i ;)
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Byakuhan Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
Looks much better with the rings :D
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G00dieGumdrops Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks, angles are crazy ;)
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Byakuhan Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
lol agreed.
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return-paxeni Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very nice, especially appreciates how did the planet's surface!
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G00dieGumdrops Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Student General Artist
Thankyou very much :D
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return-paxeni Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no problem.it's the true
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Cryo-11 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AMAZING! The rings are really beautiful!
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G00dieGumdrops Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks much, im glad you like it :D
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Byakuhan Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
Something about the rings looks off. I know from experience that making planet rings is like the hardest thing ever. But in this case it just looks like the perspective don't match up.
It might be the angle of the entire piece making it hard to tell, or it could be the angle of the rings themselves. Not sure, it just erks me. lol
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G00dieGumdrops Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Student General Artist
Ya i was trying to get it right im just not very experienced at it haha, but ill keep working, thanks for the comment :)
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Byakuhan Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
You're welcome. I'm not very experienced with it neither, or else I'd offer some advice. :P
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Foxi-5 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
I agree with this observation, the ring is out of shape, it needs to be flattened more to make the perspective right. Good points; excellent angle, dramatic and picturesque.
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Byakuhan Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
Thanks. I wasn't sure if it was just me or not. Getting perspective right is one of the hardest things to do when you're looking for realism. IMO anyway.
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G00dieGumdrops Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks much :D, and u guys are right haha
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Nils-Iver Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Fun
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G00dieGumdrops Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Student General Artist
Thankyou :D
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Ionosphere-Negate Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
From my angle, I can't see anything "wrong" with it. You probably know more about it than I, so I suggest you keep doing what you are doing and improving on your technique.

Well, uh... The lens flare could use a bit more work.
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G00dieGumdrops Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Student General Artist
Definately haha, it does like rather poor :P
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Kimhoyer Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, the only advice I can give is a suggestion add some different colours to the lands masses to give it that different bio spheres feel that earth has.

I attached a like to an image at NASA to show you what I mean.
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G00dieGumdrops Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Student General Artist
Ya that makes sense, ill try to fix that somehow, thanks for the comment:D
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Kimhoyer Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Glad to be able to help.
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